“Sorry about your friends,” said Major Jones, without a hint of real sympathy. “But we have a war to fight son, with living soldiers.”
“Sir, I-“ Jones cut me off with an angry glare.
“Son, we got two hours in-system to find your friends. Then it’s off to the New Millennia Colony. They got about a billion people to defend there. So what do you think is more important to the navy, New Millennia or your friends?” he said.
I thought about it for a second. “Sir, to me, they aren’t mutually exclusive-“ he gave me the cut signal across his throat before I could finish.
“No more chatter, newbie. Now get the fuck outta my sight,” he snapped, then went back to his paperwork.
I left, not bothering to salute.
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12 comments:
your book looks pretty interesting. I'm putting it on my list of books to read.
Thanks very much! I appreciate it!
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Sounds like a fun one! Definitely have to give it a look in the online store...
There's trouble brewing, and it's not at the New Millenia colony!
Nothing like a hard-bitten, seasoned veteran to put things into perspective, eh? Nice conflict.
I am loving the main character. He has guts. If it was me Major Jones would have me crying in the corner. lol. I hope you print some more and I will be happy to review Speedwing on my book review blog, if you would like. I review a lot of YA fantasy,and am looking to review some science fiction for a better balance. (http://nrgalloway24.wordpress.com/2012/08/29/spirited-13-haunting-tales/)
Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
I also loved the title of your blog. Clever.
Military logic. And that "son" certainly doesn't sound fatherly.
Dang military protocol! The dialogue seemed very realistic and put the two speakers right in their place. Well done.
I like how in the face of utter aggression, this character remained calm. And persistent. At least, until dismissed. That makes him seem so genuine and likable, which makes me want to know more. Great snippet.
Very intriguing!!! Looking forward to more!
Thanks all, for the kind comments!
Nicole, I will take you up on your offer!
Also, I have a standing offer to anyone who buys SPEEDWING as an ebook on the Kindle or nook (or any other device) that I will send you a signed author's copy of the print version when that comes out, which should be soon.
So thanks all. I appreciate it.
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